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Xander
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hmmm, interesting little teaser. I'm curious to see how Lex comes into play...
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Thanks Xand,

Chapter 4 Page 1 & 2 Preview are up on the site Very Happy

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Hawkeye of Krypton wrote:
Thanks Xand,

Chapter 4 Page 1 & 2 Preview are up on the site Very Happy

http://www.geocities.com/buffysmallvillecrossover/


Ha! Very nice, I like how Lex only says one word, but it means so much...especially now with this season on tv. Interested in seeing how this plays out. I think I may know where you are going to take the storyline...maybe. Wink
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Great preview Hawkeye. Any time frame on the rest of it? No pressure just wondering.

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Tom Groupie wrote:
Great preview Hawkeye. Any time frame on the rest of it? No pressure just wondering.


I'd say I'm about half way done. So hopefully shortly after the Season Finale of SV on the 15th. Very Happy

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I love it! Although you could have wiped that bracelet off when Buffy tried to punch Clark... it reminds me of Kara's arm that Clark stopped from punching the Martian Manhunter!
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lauravforever wrote:
I love it! Although you could have wiped that bracelet off when Buffy tried to punch Clark... it reminds me of Kara's arm that Clark stopped from punching the Martian Manhunter!


You caught me. I was hoping I could get away with it...haha. That's actually a great suggestion, Thanks Smile I might have to go back and remove the bracelet

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I'd wish someone would review my fics... yet they are all in the "After Midnight" section...

You can keep it if you want to. It just caught my eye, lol.
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Chapter 4 Pages 1 - 6 are up on-site

Also some minor revisions to previous Chapter 4 preview...

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CHAPTER 4 FINISHED.....IN IT'S "COMPLETENESS"

PLEASE BE SURE ALL PAGES LOAD

Putting the chapter up here because I'm too lazy to upload it to my site right now. Worked myself to death to finish this, after school finals, but before summer courses....lol....May Still Be A Little Rough.....Hope I can hear some opinions.

Anyway, without further adieu, I give you

Chapter 4: "Where Do We Go From Here?":

Short Description: This chapter features Lex and Bray at Luthor mansion...Be sure to reread Chapter 2, if you don't know who Bray is....



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Very good chapter. I really like the confrontation between Bray and Lex. The twist with Bray being a Meteor freak Vamp who is immune to sunlight is pretty cool I thought.


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Xander wrote:
Very good chapter. I really like the confrontation between Bray and Lex. The twist with Bray being a Meteor freak Vamp who is immune to sunlight is pretty cool I thought.


Not only is Bray immune to sunlight, he absorbs it and draws strength from it, Xand. Like a certain superboy... Wink
Remember, Bray shows his "super-inhuman" abilites like: Superspeed, Superstrength and Flight......3 big ones.....Hint Hint

I understand it's hard to understand what's going on... You kinda have to pay close attention to the dialogue.


Some other cool things of note:

Bray is a redhead, like Lex..
Lex's gift from Bray, "the Veritas Insignia", might now hang proudly in his office as a reminder and may lead Lex to further revelations down the road.
Bray: "Adolf thought I was crazy too"... I wonder who that's referring too?
Bray is first shown superspeeding over Lex's shoulder on page 5, this shot is very reminiscent of a shot from Chapter 1 with Clark over Buffy's shoulder
The green glow when Bray is shot at, is representative of the Kryptonite fuel-source in his heart from Chapter 2.


Will Bray now head to Smallville High School to find this unfound Slayer? I just hope someone heads him off... Wink

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Chapter 5 Teaser


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That's a really simple little teaser, but I really like it alot. I think it's my favorite teaser so far, good job on that sir. Wink
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Cool.
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